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©2005-2010 ~BethElizabethShort
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I keep your picture beside my bed,
And I still remember everything you said,
I always thought our love was so right I
guess I was wrong.
Always thought you'll be by my side papa
now you gone.


All I wanna know baby..
If what we had was good..
How come you don't call me..
anymore?

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:iconlobey:
Cute image :D Love the balance and texture. Great job. :w00t:

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i'm drowning in anonymity; and with no hand reaching after me into the quicksand, it's a swift downward spiral of slow asphyxiation.

~ib-deviants - for ib kids
:iconbethelizabethshort:
thank you so much!:hug: so glad you like it...

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"....Her body was found SEVERED in the Cranshaw district January 15, 1947."
:iconidansimpson:
i really enjoy the image, however i think this could use title that is up to the standards of the picture.
:iconidansimpson:
i suppose i dont mean a title. i quite enjoy "how come" as a title. the text on the image could be as good as your picture.
:iconbethelizabethshort:
well....i always find links to music.most of my photos have metalcore "poems" as comments...
and this is how i felt related to this photo.....hmmm,i guess i find it hard to be deep and dark and (sic) every day...:)
so...if you were to submit this picture what text would you stop to?
(thank you for the comment - i'm tryin to get better here.......not hear how f***** great i am;cause i know i'm not.:))

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"....Her body was found SEVERED in the Cranshaw district January 15, 1947."
:iconmzrudejude:
I love this! Fav'ed!
:iconbethelizabethshort:
thx!:hug:

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"....Her body was found SEVERED in the Cranshaw district January 15, 1947."
:iconidansimpson:
hey, thanks for the thoughtful reply. i'm glad to see that you're in this for good reasons as well, good for you.

honestly, this picture is anything but metalcore. frankly, if you were to fix this pictures top right and lower right corners with a perspective crop to make this picture REALLY flat, this would be indie rock.

i can't really say what i would use as a title, though i do still like "how come" without any extra stuff involved. frankly it's a bit distracting. this picture has so few elements involved (another reason i like it) and it seems as though you are unnecessarily weighing it down.

i wish i could help you out more with this one. its good. just sleep on it and something brilliant will come to your mind! good luck!
:iconbethelizabethshort:
right...i think bricks make you think of somethin England-related...so yeah,indie is more like it.
truth is that....i was really waitin for someone to call...and he didnt (even as we speak!) :) .... and i was standin there thinkin if i should call him myself or not....same old story....so....i'm gonna take the photo again;with the bricks paralel this time!and a better feel tp it all;not cheap-romance-r'n'b-lyrics-crap....,THANK YOU!i am now a better person!:)

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"....Her body was found SEVERED in the Cranshaw district January 15, 1947."

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